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Before the Eye

bradford uk Oct 15, 2025
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Before the Eye
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The sky is turning red, panic spreads across Bradford.  Something is forming in the sky, it's an eye.

Before the eye

Its starts off like any other day, or so I thought, I looked out the window as usual, but something was odd. The sky felt strange.

During school, I had an eerie feeling that I was being watched.

When I was coming back from school there were no clouds almost like they were running away from something.

As the time approached 9pm, the sky was turning red. I asked my brother, "Why is the sky turning red?"

He replied, "I don’t know but it is bedtime," I head to bed. I notice that the sky is red?

Screams fill Bradford. Something is forming in the sky, it's an eye.

There was someone banging on the door.

He said something about the eye killing people but he was probably drunk. Right before I could open the door, the eye looked at him and he vanished.

Then I started to think he was telling the truth.

Too soon I realised every 10 minutes it would close its eye for one minute. Soon I figured the military were not helping us so I decided to take matters into my own hands.

By the time I started to organise a plan, my brother had boarded up all the windows.

I thought I could go to the firework shop to explode that thing. I got ready to go to the firework shop, the eye closed, right before I could leave, my brother grabbed my shoulder and said, "Where are you going?" I replied with, "None, of your business!"

Then I ran as fast as I could out the door and my brother followed close behind.

My eyes locked on to the shop.

Right before I got there the eye opens.  My brother jumps on me to cover me from the eye and he says “FIND SHELTER” then he starts to vanish. 

I jump into a nearby shop and start to cry and recall all my memories with him. 

I had to wait around 10 minutes then it closed. 

I ran to the firework shop and as I get there I get a firework and shoot it but right before it disappeared.

Out of nowhere hundreds of people fell from the sky then I saw my brother hit the floor and we walked home. 

I decided to sleep and I had a dream where there were muted eyes.

5 years later

I woke up and the sky was tuning red...

 Published with permission of Foxhill Primary School 

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