Herminie and Denise’s Journey
Nov 12, 2025
Herminie was in bed reading an amazing thriller with Denise until they heard an unusually loud, scary roar.
AHH! Shouted Denise
They froze.
"In the middle of the night!" she asked Denise.
“I know, right.” Denise said
"Denise, don't anyone hear you, they are going to tell the guards in the hallway!” whispered Herminie, “plus your a chicken your not really supposed to talk!' said Herminie. Denise replied, 'Alright, alright!'
Herminie threw on her clothes and headed outside with the one and only Denise.
Denise shouted, 'Wait for me, I have little legs! Can you please pick me up.'
"Goodness! You are bossy, but yes I will” laughed Herminie while following Denises order.
They come to the forest and see the beast called Cerboros. They freeze. (Denise was THAT terrified she pooped on Herminie)
"Hey, Denise, what is your problem?" she shouted.
“Sorry! I do that when I'm scared, here have an egg they make people big, strong, and tall."
“Wow that’s useful right now” Herminie grabbed the bright blue egg and ate it... well, she inhaled it more like!
The beast was staring right in their direction.
"Well, let's fight." Herminie started to grow and get stronger. She screamed in confidence and ran until Denise went somewhere.
Herminie dragged her sword, made a colossal Jump and sliced the creature's face.
Whilst Herminie was fighting and risking her life Denise was sat near a blueberry bush, chomping away and cheering on Herminie. (She’s very good as at multitasking.)
Herminie had cut her leg due to the Cerberos, but she wasn’t done, she had a run up and stabbed the ugly, cold-hearted beast right in its head. Herminie ran over.
The girls waited for death.
“Hi I’m Mell, you guys seemed pretty scared of us!” said the ostrich.
“I’m Mica. Do you need help out of here?” Herminie smiled. "Yes, yes we do!!!”
“Follow me" Mica suggested. “There’s a portal to the sea.”
"Oh, wow, thank you for helping us. You didn't need you to do that” the girls replied, "Well, we better get off!" said Denise.
Bye. Nice to meet you," spoke Mica and Mell.
"Nice to meet you too" Herminie smiled.
“Wait if the portal leads to the sea...”
‘Mmh” said Mell.
"Then will there be sharks?" Herminie screamed.
"Yes, but you'll be fine," Mica spoke.
“I cut my leg earlier it will make sharks come.” Herminie panicked.
"You'll be fine" replied Mica.
The girls jumped with a splash and a scream but before you know it, this turned into mission impossible, a blue shark started chasing them. They were so close to shore but then they….. JUST! Made it.
“You were lucky this time” shouted the shark.
He swam off.
The girls saw a baby turtle.
“Are you OK?” said Denise
“Well those nasty birds are trying to eat me!” exclaimed the turtle.
Denise had a lightbulb moment and she picked a leaf off a great big bush and asked Herminie to hold it over by the turtle so he could waddle into the sea. As he got into the sea he waved goodbye.
“Thanks for helping me, oh by the way there’s a hole in the wall that leads to Hogwarts behind the vines if you are looking to go there.” yelled the turtle.
"Oh, wait, thank you, we did need to go there” Denise exclaimed.
“I have got to go my daddy’s waiting for me” he said
“Thanks for your help!” they spoke
As they climbed through the hole to home they realised they had been gone for four days!
“Ahhh... we are FINALLY home!
They both got into bed early to finish the book they were reading 4 days ago!

Published with permission of Foxhill Primary School