Marshmallows versus Hot Dogs
Nov 26, 2025
"What's happened, Bob? Why are the hot dogs trying to eat us?" I shouted.
"Errrr," said Bob, twisting the top of his foot on the floor.
"Bob!"
"FINE, I may have eaten the hot dog king" muttered Bob.
I was so fuming.
I went to work the next morning and found out in the news, that the population had gone down by 3 marshmallows.
What has happened? I thought to myself.
Then I picked up the newspaper and saw that it was the hot dogs that killed the marshmallows
After work, I went for a peaceful walk in the majestically green forest and heard a crowd shouting.
It was at the historic castle where the hotdogs had been victorious, more than 100 years ago.
I squeezed through the crowd to see that the hotdogs were fighting us.
A spear flew right over my head.
“WHOA!” I screamed.
The fighting went on for days, however, one by one Marshmallows started dropping out of the fight.
I knew I needed to fix Bob's mistake!
So I formed a crew. We had 5 members in total, that was all he needed.
We had me, a fighter, Bob, a fighter, probably wanting to make up for his mistake. Then we had my two sidies, fries that had escaped from KFC with gravy for hair. Finally, I had my best friend, Fred the hacker.
The fighting has been on hold for a few weeks now.
The hot dogs were getting tired of guarding the castle from nothing.
It was peak time to attack, we all snuck out at about midnight; well, apart from Fred, who was on his computer at home.
We tiptoed through the forest and made our way to the entrance which was a 3ft wide steel door and the only way in was working out the passcode.
“I’ve got on their radio frequency!” Fred radioed to us sounding very proud of himself.
"Great." I replied, trying not to sound like I'm impressed.
I waited; it wasn't long before Fred shouted, "I've got the passcode. It's campfire."
"We’re in!"
I inserted the code on the keypad and the door opened.
I made sure we weren't being followed and we went down the corridor.
Then we went into this spectacular room with the latest high-tech weapons.
We got equipped, and we were ready to fight.
Just when we were about to enter another room, Fred said this "I'm in the systems, black out in 3, 2, 1!" It went pitch black.
However, even though the light decreased, the volume increased. Sirens roared and guards screamed. I shouted at Fred: "What have you done?!"
We all decided that we had to go fight the hotdogs at some point. We went out and fought.
The fighting went on for hours, we were now struggling to defend ourselves..
Then Bob was stabbed.
"No, no, no!" I said with quiver in my voice.
I got so mad, I went on a rampage killing hotdogs left and right.
The new hotdog king realised they were going to lose the battle, so they made a peace offering which we declined then they finally surrendered.

Published with permission of Foxhill Primary School